Many times I’ve been to the creek
that follows the railroad tracks.
I remember summer’s end,
my feet dangling in the water
my reluctant goodbye to childhood.
I’ve traveled long periods alone,
with friends, some more than friends, and a loyal dog.
I’ve been to a tiny pastry shop
where we pressed our faces so close
exchanging visions of what came next,
our paths merging in the distance.
I love the last line of your poem– the image of merging paths is a powerful one!
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I echo Melanie on the wonderful surprise of the last line and the image preceding it, the two faces, pressed and dreaming. Lovely poetry.
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My favorite line: “my reluctant goodbye to childhood.” At first glance the poem seems effortless and simple but when I really read it, there is a lot of emotion contained in this that I can feel. This is beautiful.
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A lovely reflection in the form of a poem. Bravo!
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